Is there anything that I should improve on the backstory that I wrote?

2021.10.18 02:22 SpakSter123 Is there anything that I should improve on the backstory that I wrote?

Basically, I'm writing a fun little story to my friends in a site, its about magic objects that give its wielder powers. I'm currently writing about a legendary group that disbanded 5 years ago due to a tragic accident, and i wanna know if this backstory makes any sense
so, basically, 5 years before the main events of the story, an accident ocurred in where a group of people tested the effects of a recently created machine on another member of the group, however, it went wrong and the tester was teleported to who knows where, never to be seen again, and the machine blew up. The leader of the group fires the lead suspect of who caused the machine to malfunction, and the person who was fired went crazy: they know they didnt do it, they KNEW who did it: the only other person who was responsible for handling the system of the machine, and so they went crazy. One day they had enough and grabbed a sharp object, then stabbed the person who they thought caused the machine to malfunction, they left the area before anyone could have seen them. However, little did they know that the sharp object was actually one of the magic objects mentioned before. The person obtained amazing power and became the main villain of the first few arcs of the story, seeking revenge against the person who attempted to murder them. A few days after the accident, the group disbanded since too many people left in the hopes of moving on from the accident that happaned.
Is there anything that I should improve on?
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